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Quote by acid-awakeningThe expression is good along with the variety of lines and you've used a different style to your previous drawings. I don't know what you thought when making this, if she was alone in that world and "sad" I don't think she would be skipping or leaping around. But if she was happy, I would understand but the expression goes more towards the sad side. Oh and, you didn't draw the back of the neck :P

hello. its actually the same style that im using:D somehow i cant get rid of the style..the part abt the neck i suppose u would like to think thru ur statement again:D nonetheless. ty for commenting:D:D:D:D:D

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Quote by GaiJiNYou have some nice strokes and an expressive style. Try to keep those qualities while working on key parts like the face. Keep it your style but the way you draw profiles needs some work. By improving small parts like the flow of the hair the picture will gain a lot, and also balance the whole thing, which is really important in b&w.
Ah almost forgot, you got some nice texture with your cross-hatch, keep it up!

thanks for the advice. i wanted to stick to a certain style for my drawings, which is thick apart from the hair and facial features. guess it doesnt turn out that good.. tyvm for ur comments:D

Quote by acid-awakeningwell it's not that I don't accept your style of drawing, it's unique deffinately but I'm just saying that the human body has a scale for everything and can be measured by each part you draw. For example, the body height can be measured by the length of the head. The feet should be the same length to the forearm etc. This is to keep the body lookin more human.

we are drawing manga arent we? manga isnt human:D

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Quote by TrigunPreacherGirlThe right arm seems a bit too long for her body, however, I love the details you have here. Great work.
Take care,
~"TreaGirl".

ty for commenting:D
its comforting that you like details cuz this is probably my first piece which actually has details lol. tyvm

Quote by acid-awakeningproblems: collar bone is too short, neck is too far, trapezius is mis-shaped, arm length and size. Remember this! The length of your foot is as long as the length from your elbow to your wrist. In other words, your forearm. What you're saying here is that she's got SUPER GIANT feet. You need more work on Body proportions.

wohohoho welcome back lol. its been quiet a while..
ty for the comments i'll definitely work harder on my body proportions
but her estimate height which i decided upon starting work was 177.. oh what shud i do?

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Quote by acid-awakeningWoah that's harsh! Okay, well first of all, the fire shouldn't be that thick, your lines should be thin and smooth. Since fire is quite transparent, it makes sense to make the lines thin, and also smooth for the random wave movements towards the sky.

tyvm this comment is extremely helpful
i look forward to ur next comment:D
btw welcom back. again

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Quote by acid-awakeningThe girl facing out of the window is big and the girl sitting down is small, talking about the head size here. She's sitting but she's closer, which means her head should be bigger. Try thinkin about depth and proprotion rather than clothing, theme or background

once again Hello!
and welcome back to mt
uhm shes supposed to be facing a closet/cabinet.. i suppose its quite eveident from the description
hi. i realise u dun accept the kind of proportion which i use.. i'll try and absorb as much as possible from all the comments which u've bestowed upon me but maybe you shud try looking at some of them from a different light, that way both of us can improve:D
when i was doing the pict. i was quite sober and the chars proportions were what i wanted to be depicted so i guesss.. that explains for the head difference?even if the two chars are two-four steps away from each other:D

tyvm for the comment

Quote by tokyolifeTHIS IS NOT REALY GOOD IT LOOKS LIKE HER LEGS ARE COMING OUT OF HER CHEAST

heya thanks for the comment. i'll take note of such things:D

Quote by azyl12Yeah, what acid-awakening said. Nweis, It's pretty nice. One more comment, kindly put a shade on he pupil/iris/whatever. I tought it was Neji and Hinata (Naruto). Hehe... LoLz!
Nweis,...nice art!

hi there. thnks for the comments. i dun follow naruto so im not too sure abt those two characters and i wanted the eyes to be left unshaded:D
anw ty for comments

Quote by LITTLECHIISANone thing that i will point out is that the sholders are WAY to big. Also the hed is to far down, but other than that its prety good.
Oh and the head is wat to small for the body.....
But really onther than the thinkg i sait i like it
:]
:D

thanks for the comments i'll take note of it. i suggest taking a look at some of my other works:D.seems like my style isnt well accepted=/

Quote by acid-awakeningHumm, I can understand the head being lower than the back but the tilt of the head should be slightly more so that she is facing down to the ground a bit rather than a straight shot like that.
Oh yeah, her hand is a bit bigger than the face, kinda reminds me of the lift plus add. Huahuahua.

thanks for the comment.
However
the head wasnt drawn tilting down as i didnt want her to face downwards and im glad that u find that is a straight shot:D
its actually quite obvious why her hands are bigger than the head:D .. because the hands and further in front as compared to the head:D but imm glad you noticed the difference:D my only regret is having not added enough details and shading such that u'll not misunderstand

once again, thankyou for the comment

thanks for the fav

ty for commenting

Thanks for the fav, means alot to me:D

Quote by acid-awakeningAwesome, it'd be even better if you add a massive cigar on "her right hand" Also, I think the neck is too wide. Other than that, good work.

its my style. as for the cigar. ahem* she's supposed to be a fantasy character. so... i hope u get what i mean:D ty

Quote by xiaodickwoah, nice work.. i like the clothings and love the shading... the arm looks fine other than it seems to be missing the pit like thing at the elbow part.. and lol, candyfloss..

thanks for the comment. haha the candyfloss was badly done.. but i didnt have any idea how to do it right, ohwell.
cyah around

thanks for the fave and comment

Quote by acid-awakeningWow, cool! I think you could redo the arm (closest to the left of the page) looks broken.
Nice clothing btw.

thankyou. actually i think its because my shading is abit too light thats why it looks weird, anw thx for telling me

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Quote by fireflywishesAll I've gotta say is that it looks like your character is getting ready to do Kakashi's "Sennen Goroshi" Thousand Years of Death jutsu... She kinda reminds me of Sakura from Tsubasa Chronicles. I think your piece would benefit from a little more detail on her shorts, but otherwise a nice sketch. Keep up the good work!

Thanks for the comment. it was reli hard trying to smudge manually though><
kakashi is.........?haha anw thx for the encouragement

thanks for the fave
- pokomotto

Quote by esmyuskiiit looks kinda awkward

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but its still good

ohh.. i see, can u elaborate abit more?thanks:D

Quote by yuinakichi20usp..... Actually, I have not done it yet! I'm trying to fix it to be better... >< That's not really nice as I want.....>< huhu

im just curious. are ur works fanart or copied art?