try drawing without any references next time, doodle around and i think u'll go further and higher:D

good attempt on proportion:D
good going at the col composition:D

looks like u need abit of shading to show others that the hands arent short at all:D

i think it was the colour pencils which made the picture look reli good. the blurriness and 'softness' of the style and char made the whole picture really eye-catching. ty for sharing

hi. i think u did a good job on the proportions:D
personally i think it'll be better if u put some 'light' on the char's body

uhm. the shoulder width and the right arm looks pretty off..
i see that this was done in a style diff from clamp. thats commendable:D

uhm isnt this vector art?just that u changed the chest...

uhm's who's the female char?

i like ur style. goodjob on the outfit. the pose suits the char very well. one point that i'll like to point out though; her left hip looks abit weird.. i think i'll look better if u curve in abit more, giving her a slimmer waistline.

hello
honestly speaking.. do u think this shud be in elite gallery?
its very off clamp's style:D at least i suppose thats what u're aiming for when u do trc fan art
.no hard feeelings:D im just trying to be honest

hi. this is a dounjinshi not a painting:D
but we all love doujinshis just as much

personally i think your style changed for the better. gdjob

reli gd shading:D

the face looks good, but i dont exactly understand what shes wearing and what pose it is exactly. it'll help others to understand if you added more details:D

hi there..its alright to draw using a pencil:D
anw i think the character in the middle was quite well done. proportions of the pose and the face body proportion looks good:D and gj on the anatomy.. it looks accurate to me

why isnt it in elite gallery(yet)?
btw.. what kind of pen and paper did you use?

i like the colouring. what was it done in?

i suggest. its probably alright to draw somebody else's style, but try not to 'combine' it with ur own style, cuz this is still counted as plagarism, theft of someone else's work:D

its good even without the angels:D
nice proportions there

im quite an amateur so im not too sure if im correct...
the guy's expression is abit weird.. looks to me as if he's only looking straight at smth else. maybe it'll look more 'natural' if u tilt his chin downwards

i think the wrists loook rather accurate, u just need abit of shading to make it look more obvious.gj on the proportions except, sad to say, i kinda agree with acid-awakening on the part abt the body anatomy. nth wrong with a flat body, but i suggest u add abit more details if not others may take it as a 'no shape' body
:D

looks awesome. actually i think it'll look fantastic if u apply a fair bit of shading to it; probably only on the cloth look-alike thingy; especially when u're extremely good with colours and shading:D

wow.im impressed.30mins if a very short time

pretty neat work. i suggest creating originals for a new start. no doubt it'll be hard, but i suppose you'll do just fine:D