Quote by pokomottouhm. the shoulder width and the right arm looks pretty off..
i see that this was done in a style diff from clamp. thats commendable:D

thank you for comment and addvise -/|\-

i will keep it up

well it's not that I don't accept your style of drawing, it's unique deffinately but I'm just saying that the human body has a scale for everything and can be measured by each part you draw. For example, the body height can be measured by the length of the head. The feet should be the same length to the forearm etc. This is to keep the body lookin more human.

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Quote by pokomottowe are drawing manga arent we? manga isnt human:D

true that ^^ but personally i prefer to go for realism but a mix in style is always good

Quote by pokomottouhm's who's the female char?

xD its supposed to be nico robin @.@... although it really doesnt look like her that much @.@

Quote by pokomottohello
honestly speaking.. do u think this shud be in elite gallery?
its very off clamp's style:D at least i suppose thats what u're aiming for when u do trc fan art
.no hard feeelings:D im just trying to be honest

To be honest, I'm not sure what is considered to be "Elite" or normal art. What do you look for when you look at the Elite art?
I merely submit my art for the fun of it, because that's what I love to do. However I have no control over which of my art goes to the Elite or Highlighted galleries.

Yes, I do aim to make it look Clamp-ish, but not too much.

Thanks for your comment, regardless.
Be well!

<3 Ele

No prob!
Hehe-...

Haha nice you draw too! Nice to meet another artist!
I gonna check out your drawings they look so nice! <3
I came here to say:

on my doujinshi --Power-- !
I really appreciate your comment! I'm happy you liked my drawing
Take care!~

Quote by pokomottoThanks for the fav, means alot to me:D

it was my pleasure..you are a talented guy and your work deserves attention from my point of view
hope to see more nice doujins from you

Quote by pokomottoits my style. as for the cigar. ahem* she's supposed to be a fantasy character. so... i hope u get what i mean:D ty

Huahuahua, Lol Okie then. Be Seeing you later then.

Quote by pokomottoi think the wrists loook rather accurate, u just need abit of shading to make it look more obvious.gj on the proportions except, sad to say, i kinda agree with acid-awakening on the part abt the body anatomy. nth wrong with a flat body, but i suggest u add abit more details if not others may take it as a 'no shape' body
:D

Hi there!
Thanks for the comment and i really appreciate it..
cya ard and have a nice week

Quote by pokomottoThanks for the comment. it was reli hard trying to smudge manually though><
kakashi is.........?haha anw thx for the encouragement

Oh, I know... I used to smudge my artwork using a Kleenex... As for Kakashi... he's a character from Naruto. (You can find out more about him if you search wikipedia for "Hatake Kakashi") Take cares! (^-^)/

Quote by pokomottopretty neat work. i suggest creating originals for a new start. no doubt it'll be hard, but i suppose you'll do just fine:D

If u want to see an original from me, I'll sugest u to take a look at this: ^o^ Kiki & Pumpkin ^o^ by Chiaki-chan . Original work from me.

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Quote by acid-awakeningNice clothes there, funny looking belt... so massive
speaking of massive, her butt is so poofy lol
I think the hair spiking into her face is a little too intentional, especially the one on "her" right side of the face

looks neat. it may be a lousy work to you, but i think its nice.
ANW fyi acid awakening, i suggest you read more manga and make a trip to japan before commenting without brainstorming.

Thank you for the comment, but if you don't mind, you shouldn't critique on acid-awakening's comments like that. I welcome all comments, and critiques help me improve, therefore I find that acid's is helpful. I'm sorry this is too harsh, so please forgive me.